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the graph show the number of turtles in.india in.1980 to 2012

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The given chart demonstrates the number of turtles which has expanded in India. The graph covers the period between 1980 and 2012 and has devided into four group of turtles. As it is seen, Graph has started at 100 for all species. The number of olive turtles has increased dramatically, from 100 in 1980 to 130 in 2012 and it touched the highest point in these categories. In contrast, there was a major decline in the number leathers turtles. It has decreased from 100 to 55 in 2012. The data indicated some minor fluctuations in two other sectors. As it can be seen green turtles has modest decline, from 100 to 90, on contrary blue turtles has a slight increase from 100 to 105. Overall it can be concluded that the olive turtles has soared and to put it another way These species of turtles were more common than others.
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chart demonstrates the number of
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turtles
which has expanded in India. The graph covers the period between 1980 and 2012 and has
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devided
into four group of turtles.

As it is
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seen
, Graph has
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started
at 100 for all species. The number of olive
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turtles
has increased
dramatically
, from 100 in 1980 to 130 in 2012 and it touched the highest point in these categories.
In contrast
, there was a major decline in the number leathers
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turtles
. It has decreased from 100 to 55 in 2012.

The data indicated
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some
minor fluctuations in two other sectors. As it can be
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seen
green
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turtles
has modest decline, from 100 to 90, on contrary blue
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turtles
has a slight increase from 100 to 105.

Overall
it can
be concluded
that the olive
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turtles
has soared and to put it another way These species of
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turtles
were more common than others.
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IELTS academic the graph show the number of turtles in. india in. 1980 to 2012

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6.5
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