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The graph below outlines paper and plastic cup production at a factory over the period of one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below outlines paper and plastic cup production at a factory over the period of one year. bYd03
The graph compares the production of paper and plastic cups in a factory over the twelve months of a year. Overall, the production of paper cups predominates over the plastic ones in the majority of months. Otherwise, both of the cups go through the fluctuating curves during the entire year. To begin, the production of paper cups commenced from 1. 1 million in the January to reach 1. 8 million by April. During in between the months, it showed a drop in March to 1. 2 from 1. 7 million February production. From May to September, its production stayed relatively stable between 1. 0 and 1. 2 million. However, October and November has seen the rise in the growth to 1. 5 and 1. 6 million respectively before declining to 1. 2 million by the end of year in the December. On the other hand, the plastic cups follow the pattern of consecutive rise-drop in their production from January to July. The months of January (1. 2 million), March (1. 6 million), May (1. 4 million) and July (1. 8 million) are having comparatively higher production rate than February, April and June (approximately 1. 0 million). During the second half of year, August, September and December have roughly equal level of production (1. 0 million); whilst a little higher 1. 2 and 1. 4 million produce of cups are done in October and November respectively.
The graph compares the
production
of paper and plastic
cups
in a factory over the twelve
months
of a year.

Overall
, the
production
of paper
cups
predominates over the plastic ones in the majority of
months
.
Otherwise
, both of the
cups
go through the fluctuating curves during the entire year.

To
begin
, the
production
of paper
cups
commenced from 1. 1
million
in the January to reach 1. 8
million
by April. During in between the
months
, it
showed
a drop in March to 1. 2 from 1. 7
million
February
production
. From May to September, its
production
stayed
relatively
stable between 1. 0 and 1. 2
million
.
However
, October and November has
seen
the rise in the growth to 1. 5 and 1. 6
million
respectively
before
declining to 1. 2
million
by the
end
of year in the December.

On the other hand
, the plastic
cups
follow the pattern of consecutive rise-drop in their
production
from January to July. The
months
of January (1. 2
million)
, March (1. 6
million)
, May (1. 4
million)
and July (1. 8
million)
are having
comparatively
higher
production
rate than February, April and June (approximately 1. 0
million)
. During the second half of year, August, September and December have roughly equal level of
production
(1. 0
million)
; whilst a
little
higher 1. 2 and 1. 4
million
produce of
cups
are done
in October and November
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph below outlines paper and plastic cup production at a factory over the period of one year.

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4 paragraphs
235 words
6.5
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