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The given diagram illustrates the process of creating foods by plants. As is observed from the given illustrations plants use sunlight and carbon dioxide to create their foods. On top of that the created foods are used for their growth and repair. According to the given diagram, plants take mineral from the soil using their roots. The green leaves of the plant use sunlight and Carbon dioxide to generate sugars. The carbon dioxide is also preserved by the plant. The created sugar by the photosynthesis process is preserved and this is an important ingredient which is changed to starch. This is a vital element for growth and repair of the plant. In summary, the plant use the sunlight and carbon dioxide to produce the necessary foods the need. On the other hand mineral are collected by the plant from the soil and the plant intake this mineral using their roots.

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 to starch. This is a vital element for growth and repair of the plant.

In summary, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plant
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use
 the sunlight and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsootgraphite
carbon
 dioxide to produce the necessary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
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 intake this mineral using their roots. 