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The table chart show the number od cars produced in three countries between 2003 and 2006

The table chart show the number od cars produced in three countries between 2003 and 2006 BJ619
The number of cars produced in three different nations had been illustrated by table chart from 2003 to 2006. Units are measured into numbers. With regad to car produced in Argentina, it accounted for approximately 166, 000 automobiles were manufactured in 2003, this figure had experienced a marginal rise, making up 420, 000 of automobiles. Even though car produced to only 166, 000 engaged in 2003, this ratio was twofold increased until 2009. Furthermore, cars produced could be witnessed between Argentina and Australia, which was nearly 420, 000 and 345, 000 in 2006. Considering to cars produced in Thailand, it made up 999, 879 of automobiles in 2009 before decreasing dramatically up to 1, 180, 000, while this tendency had about three times less in the year of 2006. Although the number of cars in Thailand had significantly inclined, this figure had surpassed to the country of Australia, with a great difference of 200, 000 in the initial year. Nevertheless, the amount of cars produced in Australia almost remained relatively stable in the end of the year. Overall, the former trend of car produced had been showed an upward trend in Thailand, while the latter trend of automobiles had experienced a downfall trend by Australia throughout given the time period.
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by table chart from 2003 to 2006. Units
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regad
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car
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produced
in Argentina, it accounted for approximately 166, 000
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automobiles
were manufactured
in 2003, this figure had experienced a marginal rise, making up 420, 000 of
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automobiles
.
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car
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produced
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only
166, 000 engaged in 2003, this ratio was twofold increased until 2009.
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,
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cars
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produced
could
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between Argentina and Australia, which was
nearly
420, 000 and 345, 000 in 2006.

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cars
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produced
in Thailand, it made up 999, 879 of
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automobiles
in 2009
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before
decreasing
dramatically
up to 1, 180, 000, while this tendency had about three times less in the year of 2006. Although the number of
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cars
in Thailand had
significantly
inclined, this figure had surpassed to the country of Australia, with a great difference of 200, 000 in the initial year.
Nevertheless
, the amount of
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cars
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produced
in Australia almost remained
relatively
stable in the
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end
of the year.

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, the former
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trend
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produced
had been
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an upward
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trend
in Thailand, while the latter
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automobiles
had experienced a downfall
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IELTS academic The table chart show the number od cars produced in three countries between 2003 and 2006

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