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unemployment in Australia 2021 task 1

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The graph chart displays the percentage of unemployment in Australia in the year 2012. It can be seen that the percentage of unemployment rose drastically over the year in city areas. In the rural areas, the percentage of people who are unemployed was highest in the first quarter (6. 5%). By the time of second quarter, the graph went down by 4. 5% but again, inclined around July-September by more than 5%. In the last quarter, the percentage was constantly around 5%. In the urban areas, the percentage of people not employed was extremely low with around 2. 2%. There was an exponential growth in the data in the second trimester however, a drastic drop after in the third three months. Thereafter, a constant increment (up to 4. 9%) till the inend of the year. In conclusion, the employement opportunity decreased in the city areas over the year of 2012 whereas, the rate of unemployment decreased in rural areas.

The graph chart displays the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of unemployment in Australia in the year 2012. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of unemployment rose drastically
 over the year in city areas.

In the rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are unemployed
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but
 again, inclined around July-September by more than 5%. In the last quarter, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 was constantly
 around 5%.

In the urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 not employed was extremely
 low with around 2. 2%. There was an exponential growth in the data in the second trimester however
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inend
 of the year.

In conclusion
, the Possible spelling mistake found.employment
employement
 opportunity decreased in the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 over the year of 2012 whereas, the rate of unemployment decreased in rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. 