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The table below show results of a survey of urban residents opinions related to various aspects of life in the year 1980 and 2010

The table below show results of a survey of urban residents opinions related to various aspects of life in the year 1980 and 2010 Q563L

The tables illustrates the proportion of outcomes of the different researches done on people residing in modern town and cities, it discloses opinion of public on six different aspects of life for a period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010. Overall, It depicts that Education, Shops, Environment had a positive impact on the lives of public whereas transport system and accommodation were has the least approval rating. In 1980, 82% respondents were satisfied with the Educations, while for Shops and Environment 75% and 72% people were in favor. However only 20% public is not able to decide whether they had a approval or not, whereas only 14% individuals were dissatisfied with them. Healthcare were preferred by 64% population and 24% people were confused, what they think about this sector and less than half of it needed improvement to be done in this area. 54-56% public was satisfied with the transport system and accommodation, more than one third of individuals has are not sure whether they support or not. Less than 15% population was against it. In contrast, Healthcare in 2010 has gained approval rating of the respondents as 83% were satisfied, while the satisfaction rate of Environment and Educations had declined but for shops it had shown improvement 64%, 76% and 81% respectively. Neutral options for all the three declined in due course of time but their negative responses had shown increment till 20%. Moreover, in case of transport system and accommodation system people started liking them approximately 65-67% population favored them.

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