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The diagram below shows how the paper is made and recycled. Summarise the by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where necessary. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how the paper is made and recycled. Summarise the by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where necessary. 8LyVw

The given process illustrates the making of paper as well as how it is recycled. There are 5 steps involved in the creation of paper. Firstly, the radiata pine thinning are harvested from the plantations. They are then de-barked in a drum. The de-barked wood is then sent into a wood chipper which is followed by thermomechanical refining where it utilizes water. Lastly, the product is sent to a paper-making machine. In order to recycle the paper back into paper, a six-step process is put in place. Starting with newspapers which are collected from kerbside collections. Once the collection is done, the newspapers are de-inked in a machine. De-inked papers are cleaned and go through a fine screening process. Thereafter the product is sent to the thermomechanical and mixed with recycled pulp. Ultimately, the end product is once again put in the paper-making machine for manufacturing recycled paper.

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 process illustrates the making of paper as well
 as how it is recycled
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radiata
 pine thinning are harvested
 from the plantations. They are then Possible spelling mistake found.debarked
de-barked
 in a drum. The Possible spelling mistake found.debarked
de-barked
 wood is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 into a wood chipper which is followed
 by Possible spelling mistake found.
thermomechanical
 refining where it utilizes water. Lastly
, the product is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to a paper-making machine.

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 in place. Starting with newspapers which are collected
 from kerbside collections. Once the collection is done
, the newspapers are Possible spelling mistake found.defineddebunkeddelinted
de-inked
 in a machine. Possible spelling mistake found.DefinedDebunkedDelinted
De-inked
 papers are cleaned
 and go through a fine screening process. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thereafter,
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 the product is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
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thermomechanical
 and mixed with recycled pulp. Ultimately
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 product is once again put in the paper-making machine for manufacturing recycled paper. 