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The diagram below shows how the paper is made and recycled. Summarise the by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where necessary. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how the paper is made and recycled. Summarise the by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where necessary. 8LyVw
The given process illustrates the making of paper as well as how it is recycled. There are 5 steps involved in the creation of paper. Firstly, the radiata pine thinning are harvested from the plantations. They are then de-barked in a drum. The de-barked wood is then sent into a wood chipper which is followed by thermomechanical refining where it utilizes water. Lastly, the product is sent to a paper-making machine. In order to recycle the paper back into paper, a six-step process is put in place. Starting with newspapers which are collected from kerbside collections. Once the collection is done, the newspapers are de-inked in a machine. De-inked papers are cleaned and go through a fine screening process. Thereafter the product is sent to the thermomechanical and mixed with recycled pulp. Ultimately, the end product is once again put in the paper-making machine for manufacturing recycled paper.
The
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given
process illustrates the making of paper
as well
as how it
is recycled
.

There are 5 steps involved in the creation of paper.
Firstly
, the
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radiata
pine thinning
are harvested
from the plantations. They are then
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de-barked
in a drum. The
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de-barked
wood is then
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sent
into a wood chipper which
is followed
by
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thermomechanical
refining where it utilizes water.
Lastly
, the product is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to a paper-making machine.

In order to recycle the paper back into paper, a six-step process
is put
in place. Starting with newspapers which
are collected
from kerbside collections. Once the collection
is done
, the newspapers are
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de-inked
in a machine.
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De-inked
papers
are cleaned
and go through a fine screening process.
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Thereafter
the product is
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sent
to the
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thermomechanical
and mixed with recycled pulp.
Ultimately
, the
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end
product is once again put in the paper-making machine for manufacturing recycled paper.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the paper is made and recycled. Summarise the by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where necessary.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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