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umber of male and female university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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The given graph illustrates the number of male and female university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Overall, female fellows where completed their education in university level is more comparitively with male candidates whereas it almost double with males. From the begining onwords female passed out candidates took a major role even after 2004 Firstly number of female graduates start with nearly with one lakh but males graudated almost seventy thousand only meanwhile in year 1995 both the male and female are increased rapidly thereafter, upto period 1999 as well in 2001 gradual downfall takes in place for sucessfully graduated students may be becasue of several factors that involved in their primary education. Untill 2006 there are signifcant results in completion of their education both male and female that is almost by half of the percentage in increment scince students came to know the importance of their education and certification.
The
given
graph illustrates the number of male and
female
university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Overall
,
female
fellows where completed their education in university level is more
comparitively
with male candidates whereas
it
almost
double
with
males
. From the
begining
onwords
female
passed out candidates took a major role even after 2004

Firstly
number of
female
graduates
start
with
nearly
with one lakh
but
males
graudated
almost seventy thousand
only
meanwhile in year 1995 both the male and
female
are increased
rapidly
thereafter,
upto
period 1999
as well
in 2001 gradual downfall takes in place for
sucessfully
graduated students may be
becasue
of several factors that involved in their primary education.

Untill
2006 there are
signifcant
results in completion of their education both male and
female
that is
almost by half of the percentage in increment
scince
students came to know the importance of their education and certification.
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