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umber of male and female university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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The given graph illustrates the number of male and female university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Overall, female fellows where completed their education in university level is more comparitively with male candidates whereas it almost double with males. From the begining onwords female passed out candidates took a major role even after 2004 Firstly number of female graduates start with nearly with one lakh but males graudated almost seventy thousand only meanwhile in year 1995 both the male and female are increased rapidly thereafter, upto period 1999 as well in 2001 gradual downfall takes in place for sucessfully graduated students may be becasue of several factors that involved in their primary education. Untill 2006 there are signifcant results in completion of their education both male and female that is almost by half of the percentage in increment scince students came to know the importance of their education and certification.
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university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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fellows where completed their education in university level is more
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comparitively
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passed out candidates took a major role even after 2004

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graduates
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results in completion of their education both male and
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students came to know the importance of their education and certification.
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