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The two maps provided compare an island, before and after some material facilities for tourists are erected.

The two maps provided compare an island, before and after some material facilities for tourists are erected. Bg1bw

The two maps provided compare an island, before and after some material facilities for tourists are erected. It is clear that the main change of the island is the addition of accommodation, also a restaurant and a reception, which to serve the tourists. It can be seen that before the construction of new facilities, the island is desolate, and after some buildings such as places for tourists to accommodate are built, the island becomes a place to visit. There are 6 houses are set up in the West of the island and 8 more are built in the middle of the island. The footpath is arranged around the accommodation areas and there is also a path which leads to the swimming area on the Western border of the island. Besides the living space, a reception and a restaurant to the North of it are added and located between the two accommodation areas. In addition, there are a pier right in the South of the island for yatches and a 100-metre vehicle track connects the way from the pier to the restaurant (from the South to the North) and surrounds the reception place

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clear
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 a restaurant and a reception, which to serve the tourists.

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seen
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before
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some
 buildings such as places for tourists to accommodate are built
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island
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houses
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. The footpath is arranged
 around the accommodation areas and there is also
 a path which leads to the swimming area on the Western border of the island.

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added
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island
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