Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The given bar graph illustrates about imprisonment of people in five countries. The report is represented in from year 1930 to 1980. The data are given in thousands for the calculation of imprisonment in five countries.

The given bar graph illustrates about imprisonment of people in five countries. The report is represented in from year 1930 to 1980. The data are given in thousands for the calculation of imprisonment in five countries. Q5emP

Overall, the survey represented that in 1930 and 1980, Canada and United States had maximum imprisonment, which was nearly 120 thousands and 140 thousands respectively. To begin with, the imprisonment of Great Britain in year 1930 is 30 thousands only and within 50 years gradually increase to 80 thousands respectively. In addition to, Great Britain, Australia, and New Zealand had showed same number of imprisonment in year 1970. On the other hand, in the year 1940 and 1950, Great Britain it showed range between 30 60 thousands. Whereas, in United States and Canada, it showed double in people of imprisonment than other three countries. Moreover, in 1960, all the five countries were gradually increase in range of 60 thousands and 120 thousands.

Overall
, the survey represented that in 1930 and 1980, Canada and United States had maximum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withisolationconfinementcaptivityincarcerationcustody
imprisonment
, which was nearly
 120 thousands and 140 thousands respectively
.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withisolationconfinementcaptivityincarcerationcustody
imprisonment
 of Great Britain in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1930 is 30 thousands This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 and within 50 years gradually
 increase to 80 thousands respectively
. In addition
 to, Great Britain, Australia, and New Zealand had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 same number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withisolationconfinementcaptivityincarcerationcustody
imprisonment
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1970.

On the other hand
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1940 and 1950, Great Britain it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 range between 30 60 thousands. Whereas, A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United States".in the United States
in United States
 and Canada, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 double in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withisolationconfinementcaptivityincarcerationcustody
imprisonment
 than other three countries. Moreover
, in 1960, all the five countries were gradually
Consider using a past participle here: "increased".increased
increase
 in range of 60 thousands and 120 thousands. 