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Findings from a survey regarding adult education.

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The charts show findings from a survey regarding adult education. The bar diagram shows various reasons why adults decide to study, while, the pie chart shows openion of people on how the cost of adult education should be shared. According to the bar diagram, 40% of the total adults decide to study due to their interest in the subject, while 38% decide to gain higher qualification. Adults having a job decide to study thinking that it will be helpful for their current job and this reason works for 22% of the total adults. Although, some adults decide to study to improve prospects of promotion, while others decide to enjoy along with learning. However, both reasons cover 20% of the total adults. Moreover, 12% adults decide to study for being able to change jobs while 9% adults decide to meet new people. The pie chart shows that almost 40% adults believe that the cost of each course should be taken by themselves, while 25% believe that it should be paid by the tax payers. On the other hand, 35% adults have an openion that the cost of each course falls under the responsibility of their emplyers.
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findings from a survey regarding adult education. The bar diagram
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various reasons why
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adults
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adults
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decide
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study
due to their interest in the subject, while 38%
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to gain higher qualification.
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having a job
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job and this reason works for 22% of the total
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adults
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prospects of promotion, while others
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to enjoy along with learning.
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that almost 40%
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believe that the cost of each course should
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IELTS academic Findings from a survey regarding adult education.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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