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Two maps below show some approvements on landscape in 2010 comparing with the same map in 2007.

Two maps below show some approvements on landscape in 2010 comparing with the same map in 2007. k6xkd
Two maps below show some approvements on the landscape in 2010 comparing with the same map in 2007. Initially, in 2007 we can see there is a city hospital with a ring road around it, the city has accessibility to hospital but city road and hospital road further next to the hospital road on the east there is car park place with a bus stop in two sides of the hospital road, in addition, we can see so approvement in this place in 2010 map, for example, a public car park has been added in the east side of the hospital furthermore a bus station in the west side of the hospital road has been added to this complex. former two roundabouts have an extreme effect on the accessibility between these roads around the hospital, consequently, these features and changes make the access to hospital more comfortable and faster for people.
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two roundabouts have an extreme effect on the accessibility between these
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IELTS academic Two maps below show some approvements on landscape in 2010 comparing with the same map in 2007.

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