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Traffic growth in Netherlands since 1950

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The given line graph depicts the growth of traffic in Netherlands from 1950 to 2000, which is equal to five decades. The unit is measured in percentage which is clearly represented. Overall, it is obvious that the use of cars was dramatically increased by year and year. In 1950, the use of car was 0% but it increased year by year and in the year 1980, it reached to 100% and leaded to upward trend. From 1950 to 1960, the use of train, bicycle and other public transportation was similarly increased which is started from 0%. But, train and bicycle transportation paralleled till 1970 but in later years, bicycle transportation was slightly less than the use of train. From 1960 to 1970, the public transportation was not difference in one decade but from 1970, its trend was upward trend till 2000 and the final percentage is estimated to 10% which is the lowest percentage among those four transportation.

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