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Two maps below show and island befor and after construction of some tourosm fasiliteis

Two maps below show and island befor and after construction of some tourosm fasiliteis paqAm

Two maps demonstrated an island before and after the building of facilities and public services. Overall, it is clear that the island is totally changed on the western and the center site after the construction of leisure facilities. In the first map, there is a huge land surrounded by sea and only has trees in the west and the east site. There is also has a beach that is located on the western sides which it is not used. By contrast, the second map shows some of facilities were built on the western and eastern site. A reception was built in the middle of the island that connected the restaurant and pier by car track. Another important change is that an accommodation has been built in the western and eastern part, and they are connected with food part. There is also provided the beach for swimming but trees were unchanged.

Two maps demonstrated an island This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after the building of facilities and public services.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the island is totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 on the western and the center site after the construction of leisure facilities.

In the first
 map, there is a huge land surrounded by sea and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 has trees in the west and the east site. There is also
 has a beach that is located
 on the western sides which it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
.

By contrast, the second map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the facilities") or simply say "some facilities".some of the facilitiessome facilities
some of facilities
were built
 on the western and eastern site. A reception was built
 in the middle of the island that connected the restaurant and pier by car This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
. Another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".accommodation
an accommodation
 has been built
 in the western and eastern part, and they are connected
 with food part. There is also
 provided the beach for swimming This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 trees were unchanged
. 