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THE CHART GIVEN BELOW SHOW INFORMATION ABOUT THE HOUSEHOLD PERCENTAGE OF SPENDING ON ESSENTIAL GOODS IN CHINA IN 1995 AND 2011.

THE CHART GIVEN BELOW SHOW INFORMATION ABOUT THE HOUSEHOLD PERCENTAGE OF SPENDING ON ESSENTIAL GOODS IN CHINA IN 1995 AND 2011. d3GBd
THE PIE CHART COMPARES THE SPENDING OF CHINESE INDIVIDUALS ON FOUR VITAL COMMODITIES (FOOD, CLOTHING, MEDICINE AND HOUSEHLD GOODS) FROM 1995 TO 2011. OVERALL, THE MAJORITY OF MONEY IS SPEND BY CHINESE CITIZENS IS ON FOOD WHILST, THE LEAST AMOUNT IS CONSUMED ON MEDICINE REGARDLESS OF DIFFERNT PERIODS. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, 9% MONETARY FUNDS IS SPEND BY MASSES IN CHINA ON HOUSEHOLD PRODUCTS IN 1995, WHILE IT WAS STEADILY INCLINE BY 3% IN 2011. IN CONTRAST, THE EXPENDITURE ON FOOD IS WAS NEAR ABOUT ONE- SEVENTH OF TOTAL IN BEGINNING YEAR, HOWEVER THE SPENDING ON MEALS IS DECLINED TO 59% IN FINAL PERIOD. THE PIE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE PERCENT OF MONEY SPENDING BY CHINESE CIVILIAN REPRESENTS A NEGLIGIBLE DIFFERENCE OF ONLY 1% (FROM 19% TO 18%). FINALLY, THE CONSUMPTION OF MEDICINE SHOWS A DRASTIC INCREASE OF 7% IN 16 YEARS.
THE PIE CHART COMPARES THE SPENDING OF CHINESE INDIVIDUALS ON FOUR VITAL COMMODITIES (FOOD, CLOTHING, MEDICINE AND
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HOUSEHLD
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GOODS
) FROM 1995 TO 2011.

OVERALL
, THE MAJORITY OF MONEY IS SPEND BY CHINESE CITIZENS IS ON FOOD WHILST, THE LEAST AMOUNT
IS CONSUMED
ON MEDICINE REGARDLESS OF
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DIFFERNT
PERIODS.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, 9% MONETARY FUNDS IS SPEND BY MASSES IN CHINA ON HOUSEHOLD PRODUCTS IN 1995, WHILE IT WAS
STEADILY
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INCLINE
BY 3% IN 2011.
IN CONTRAST
, THE EXPENDITURE ON FOOD IS WAS NEAR ABOUT ONE- SEVENTH OF TOTAL IN BEGINNING YEAR,
HOWEVER
THE SPENDING ON MEALS
IS DECLINED
TO 59% IN FINAL PERIOD.

THE PIE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE PERCENT OF MONEY SPENDING BY CHINESE CIVILIAN REPRESENTS A NEGLIGIBLE DIFFERENCE OF
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ONLY
1% (FROM 19% TO 18%).
FINALLY
, THE CONSUMPTION OF MEDICINE
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SHOWS
A DRASTIC INCREASE OF 7% IN 16 YEARS.
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