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THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE ONLINE SHOPPING SALES FOR RETAILS SECTORS IN NEW ZEALAND IN 2003 AND 2013.

THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE ONLINE SHOPPING SALES FOR RETAILS SECTORS IN NEW ZEALAND IN 2003 AND 2013. RwOXP
THE PROVIDED PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATES THE PERCENTAGE OF PURCHASING PRODUCTS ON INTERNET IN RETAILS SECTOR IN NEW ZEALAND IN 2003 AND 2013. THE SALES ARE CATEGORIZED WITH FOUR ITEMS (TRAVELS, FILMS, BOOKS AND CLOTHES) OVERALL, THE TRAVEL AND CLOTHES SHOW FALLS IN COMING YEARS WHEREAS, BOOKS AND MOVIES INCLINES DRACTICALLY IN 10 YEARS. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE PERCENT OF CLOTHES SELLING IS REPRESENTED 24% AND IT DRAMATICALLY DECLINE TO 16% IN 2013. LIKEWISE, THE TOUR AND TRAVEL ACCOUNTED FOR 36% AS THE HIGHEST SOLD PRODUCTS IN INITIAL YEAR AND IT STEADILY FALLS BY 7% IN 2013. THE PIE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE PERCENTILE OF MOVIES CONSUMPTION IS 21% IN 2003 THEN, IT SKYROCKETED BY 11% IN FINAL PERIOD WITH 33%. SIMILARLY, THE PAPER BOOKS IS THE LEAST PERFORMING ITEM IN BEGINNING SPAN WITH MERELY BELOW 20% AND IT NEGLIGIBLE ELEVATED TO 22% IN 2013.
THE PROVIDED PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATES THE PERCENTAGE OF PURCHASING PRODUCTS ON INTERNET IN RETAILS SECTOR IN NEW ZEALAND IN 2003 AND 2013. THE SALES
ARE CATEGORIZED
WITH FOUR ITEMS (TRAVELS, FILMS, BOOKS AND CLOTHES)

OVERALL
, THE TRAVEL AND CLOTHES
SHOW
FALLS IN COMING YEARS WHEREAS, BOOKS AND MOVIES INCLINES
DRACTICALLY
IN 10 YEARS.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, THE PERCENT OF CLOTHES SELLING
IS REPRESENTED
24% AND IT
DRAMATICALLY
DECLINE TO 16% IN 2013.
LIKEWISE
, THE TOUR AND TRAVEL ACCOUNTED FOR 36% AS THE HIGHEST SOLD PRODUCTS IN INITIAL YEAR AND IT
STEADILY
FALLS BY 7% IN 2013.

THE PIE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE PERCENTILE OF MOVIES CONSUMPTION IS 21% IN 2003 THEN, IT SKYROCKETED BY 11% IN FINAL PERIOD WITH 33%.
SIMILARLY
, THE PAPER BOOKS IS THE LEAST PERFORMING ITEM IN BEGINNING SPAN WITH
MERELY
BELOW 20% AND IT NEGLIGIBLE ELEVATED TO 22% IN 2013.
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