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SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTINF THE MAIN FEATURES

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Since there are two maps thta show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. It's possible to check some of the main changes. Mainly the city Road has access just for the Hospital RD. however, in 2010there are two roundabout different that 2007, because of the Bus Stop over the Hospital Rd. Also it's possible to watch that over 2007 the cark park was for staff and public that is opposite in 2010it menas that in 2010 public car park and staff car park were separated. Another change it's the place for the Bus Station, in 2007 this place was over Hospital Rd since in 2010 the Bus station is connect by the two roundabout. And the last but not the least important in 2010 if you want to go at public car park you will have to go at the east site of the city hospital at least you are lookng for the staff car park, which is located at south site of the city hospital.

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show
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hospital
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Hospital
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Hospital
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watch
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the cark
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park
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car
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park
 and staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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park
were separated
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change
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Hospital
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connect
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but
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important
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car
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park
 you will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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car
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park
, which is located
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hospital
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