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SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTINF THE MAIN FEATURES

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Since there are two maps thta show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. It's possible to check some of the main changes. Mainly the city Road has access just for the Hospital RD. however, in 2010there are two roundabout different that 2007, because of the Bus Stop over the Hospital Rd. Also it's possible to watch that over 2007 the cark park was for staff and public that is opposite in 2010it menas that in 2010 public car park and staff car park were separated. Another change it's the place for the Bus Station, in 2007 this place was over Hospital Rd since in 2010 the Bus station is connect by the two roundabout. And the last but not the least important in 2010 if you want to go at public car park you will have to go at the east site of the city hospital at least you are lookng for the staff car park, which is located at south site of the city hospital.
Since there are two maps
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road access to a city
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hospital
in 2007 and in 2010. It's possible to
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check
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some of the
main
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changes
.
Mainly
the city Road has access
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for the
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Hospital
RD.
however
, in 2010there are two roundabout
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different
that 2007,
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because
of the Bus
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Stop
over the
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Hospital
Rd.
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Also
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watch
that over 2007
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the cark
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park
was for staff and public
that is
opposite in 2010it
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that in 2010 public
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car
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park
and staff
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car
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park
were separated
. Another
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change
it's the place for the Bus Station, in 2007 this place was over
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Hospital
Rd since in 2010 the Bus station is
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connect
by the two roundabout. And the last
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not the least
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in 2010 if you want to go at public
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car
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park
you will
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have to
go at the east site of the city
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hospital
at least you are
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car
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IELTS academic SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTINF THE MAIN FEATURES

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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