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Two map sow the changes of a coastal town , called Pentland

Two map sow the changes of a coastal town, called Pentland Grnaw

The information about the modifications of a coastal town, named Pentland through the past 57 years is being illustrated by the rendered map. In 1950, the town consisted of mainly four things such as roads in the centre of it in order to connect it with car park to its east and industrial are to its west. Moreover, there was area at the northern end of the road and empty grasslands mainly in the southern side of the car park. Moving to 2007, the town had been subjected to various changes. Primarily, 10 houses were constructed in place of grasslands and many shops were built around the western and eastern parts of the roads. Another significant change was the creation and shifting of multi storey car park from the eastern side to the western side and formation of park and swimming pool just above it. Also, road has been extended around the sea area, which name is changed to yacht marina and few apartments were also built near the eastern side of it. A cinema hall is also constructed just opposite to the houses. To sum up, it can be vividly manifested that, that the town had been subjected to several changes out of which the setting up of cinema, houses, swimming pool and park were the most prominent ones.

The information about the modifications of a coastal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
, named Possible spelling mistake found.Pent landPeatland
Pentland
 through the past 57 years is being illustrated
 by the rendered map.

In 1950, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 consisted of mainly
 four things such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of it in order to connect it with car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 to its east and industrial are to its west. Moreover
, there was area at the northern This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and empty grasslands mainly
 in the southern side of the car park.

Moving to 2007, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 had been subjected
 to various This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. Primarily
, 10 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were constructed
 in place of grasslands and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 shops were built
 around the western and eastern parts of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
. Another significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 was the creation and shifting of This word is normally spelled with hyphen.multi-storey
multi storey
 car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from the eastern side to the western side and formation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and swimming pool This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above it. Also
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 has been extended
 around the sea area, which name is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to yacht marina and few apartments were also
 built near the eastern side of it. A cinema hall is also
 constructed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 opposite to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
.

To sum up, it can be vividly
 manifested that, that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 had been subjected
 to several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 out of which the setting up of cinema, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, swimming pool and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 were the most prominent ones. 