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This Pi chart illustrates the revenue and expenditures of the children's charity found in USA during year 2016. Overall, donated food accounted for the major source of income while the program services utilized maximum amount of income over expenditures. On whole, total incoming money was slightly greater than the expenditures. In detail, donated food contributed 86. 6% of total revenue and program services used 95. 8% of total income. Both played their huge role in revenue and expenditures. Other categories were playing their minor role. Community contributions produced 10. 4% of gross income. It followed the other categories like program revenue, investment income, Government grants and other income which made their contribution 0. 8% collectively. Moreover, It was 9. 2 % less than the community contributions. As far as expenditures were concerned, fundraising, management and general accounted for 2. 6% and 1. 6 % respectively. It can be easily inspected that there was a minimal gain of profit because the total revenue was actually 53561580$ and total expenditures was 53861580$. So, the revenue was slightly outraced the expenditures
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of the children's charity found
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during year 2016.
Overall
, donated food accounted for the major source of
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income
while the program services utilized maximum amount of
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over
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. On whole,
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incoming money was
slightly
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In detail, donated food contributed 86. 6% of
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and program services
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95. 8% of
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. Both played their huge role in
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and expenditures.

Other categories were playing their minor role. Community contributions produced 10. 4% of gross
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income
. It followed the other categories like program
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, investment
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,
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Government
grants and other
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which made their contribution 0. 8%
collectively
.
Moreover
, It was 9. 2 % less than the community contributions.

As far as
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were concerned
, fundraising, management and general accounted for 2. 6% and 1. 6 %
respectively
. It can be
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inspected that there was a minimal gain of profit
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was actually
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53561580$
and
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was
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53861580$
.
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IELTS academic revenue and expenditures of the children's charity

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