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The graph show the population growth in Australian cities from 1992 to 2017. Explain it.

The graph show the population growth in Australian cities from 1992 to 2017. Explain it. e3lrp

The graph illustrates the population alteration in three famous cities in Australia between 1992 and 2016. Overall, in every cities, the number of residents were rising. Besides, the difference between three cities in terms of population was much bigger in 2016 than in 1992. Concerning Sydney, in 1992, it was the highest number of all by approximately thirty thousands and, it had been able to maintain the same rank within seven years mainly because the number had been increasing drastically by about twenty thousands between 1998 and 2001. In addition to that, as for the Melbourne, roughly twenty thousands people only lived there in 1992. On the contrary, the number of inhabitants were going up significantly except for 2010-2013 and, it was about 110 thousands in 2016 which was the biggest number of all three cities followed by Sydney which was roughly 105 thousands. Next, considering Brisbane, in 1992, it was the second largest city of three popular areas. Yet, the number were fluctuating until 2004 by about forty thousands. Nevertheless, the population climbed up to more than sixty thousands in 2008 but, it suddenly declined by about fifty thousands in 2016 which was the smallest number of people of all three towns.

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