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The diagram demonstrates a process in which electricity is made by hydroelectric power station for the National grid.

The diagram demonstrates a process in which electricity is made by hydroelectric power station for the National grid. R5oQP
Overall, there are several stages involved in the process which unlike between day and night. Starting worked from a high-level reservoir in the morning on the contrary low-level reservoir would establish in the night. To begin with the nature resource, river go through the dam which is opened only in the daytime. After that the water subsequently flow in to generate electricity where it has reversible turbines to transport directly to the generator. Then, the energy passed over to the power lines, finally placing in the National grid to use in various of advantages On the other hand, In the nighttime low-level reservoir continuously rebound to the higher pool by pumping back into the same turbines. More specifically, to accumulate the value of the river to produce the energy in the following day. In conclusion, it represents that the hydroelectric power station is a renewable energy. Moreover, the more amount of water lever they have the more ton of power they can obtain.
Overall
, there are several stages involved in the process which unlike between day and night. Starting worked from a high-level reservoir in the morning
on the contrary
low-level reservoir would establish in the night.

To
begin
with the nature resource, river go through the dam which
is opened
only
in the daytime. After that the water
subsequently
flow in to generate electricity where it has reversible turbines to transport
directly
to the generator. Then, the energy passed over to the power lines,
finally
placing in the National grid to
use
in various of advantages

On the other hand
, In the nighttime low-level reservoir
continuously
rebound to the higher pool by pumping back into the same turbines. More
specifically
, to accumulate the value of the river to produce the energy in the following day.

In conclusion
, it represents that the hydroelectric power station is a renewable energy.
Moreover
, the more amount of water lever they have the more ton of power they can obtain.
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates a process in which electricity is made by hydroelectric power station for the National grid.

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