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Two diagrams illustrate changes in the airport layout now and in future.

Two diagrams illustrate changes in the airport layout now and in future. W5MPq
This two diagram shows information of an airport now and how it looks after redevelopment next year. The first diagram illustrates, current southwest airport. These are two gates for departures and arrivals. However, in the departures section, there is a check-in counter on the left side and a cafe on the right side. As well security for passport control is also available. There are 8 gates, between that there is one walkway. Shifting towards the second diagram, this plan depicts that they will double the entrance and exit. In this, there are lots of changes done like shifting cafe right to left, a check-in office left to right. One big advantage is to build bag drop system. With the help of that airport authority easily manage luggage. After security for passport control, shops are available. Major changes in gates. There were 8 gates but it becomes 18 as per new development. In addition, sky train is also available for both departures and Arrivals passengers. One customs office also there on the right-hand side, following the corner one cafe and ATM are available. Besides on corner car hire counter available. Overview of both the diagram. After development whole airport changes and it will also familiar with passengers.
This two diagram
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information of an
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airport
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now
and how it looks after redevelopment
next
year.

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first
diagram illustrates,
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current
southwest
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airport
. These are two
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gates
for departures and arrivals.
However
, in the departures section, there is a
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check
-in counter on the
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left
side and a
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cafe
on the right side.
As well
security for passport control is
also
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available
. There are 8
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gates
, between that there is one walkway. Shifting towards the second diagram, this plan depicts that they will double the entrance and exit. In this, there are lots of
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changes
done like shifting
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cafe
right to
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left
, a
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check
-in office
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left
to right. One
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big
advantage is to build bag drop system. With the
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help
of that
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airport
authority
easily
manage luggage. After security for passport control, shops are
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available
. Major
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changes
in
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gates
. There were 8
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gates
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but
it becomes 18 as per new development.
In addition
, sky train is
also
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available
for both departures and Arrivals passengers. One customs office
also
there on the right-hand side, following the corner one
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cafe
and ATM are
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available
.
Besides
on corner car hire counter available.

Overview of both the diagram. After development whole
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airport
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changes
and it will
also
familiar with passengers.
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