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the map below show the centre

the map below show the centre XV0PE
Task1 The maps illustrate the difference between the centre called Islip with it’s development orientations in a small town. Overall, it is visible that there is a change beyond recognize between the initial centre compare with it’s development plans. It can be seen clearly from the maps that the main road will be abolished completely by Dual carriageway surrounding the Islip two center. In fact, inside the Dual carriageway there are some facilities such as bus station, shopphing center, car park which are located at the North. Moreover, there are some areas such as housing will be relocated into the South of the two centre according to the development plans. two shops in the Islip town centre now might be redundanted into one, which contribute to make room for both new housings and pedestrians. The scale of the park in the plans will be limited compared to the previous one.
Task1

The maps illustrate the difference between the
centre
called
Islip
with it’s development
orientations in a
small
town.

Overall
, it is visible that there is a
change
beyond recognize between the initial
centre
compare
with it’s development
plans.

It can be
seen
clearly
from the maps that the main road will
be abolished
completely by Dual carriageway surrounding the
Islip
two center. In fact, inside the Dual carriageway there are
some
facilities such as bus station,
shopphing
center, car park which
are located
at the North.

Moreover
, there are
some
areas such as housing will
be relocated
into the South of the two
centre
according to the development plans.
two
shops in the
Islip
town
centre
now
might be
redundanted
into one, which contribute to
make
room for both new housings and pedestrians. The scale of the park in the plans will
be limited
compared to the previous one.
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IELTS academic the map below show the centre

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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