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TThe charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

TThe charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. 1Q27
The chart diagrams shows air pollution levels by different causes such as Electricity generation center, Transport and industrialization in urban as well as countryside areas of following nations, China, America, Japan and Australia. Overall, The bar chart depicts the information of air pollution in parts per million (PPM) standards. In 2021, China is more suffering by air pollution due to its industries development as well as transport media. In the other hand, Australia is having very less air pollution levels during 2021. To begin with, air pollution is widely spread in entire China. Mainly because of indutries, transport and electricity generation center. Nearly 80 PPM air pollutants are due to industries. Compared to other countries is much more higher than anyone in the list. Furthermore, America having highest air pollutants due to transport sector, Nearly 58PPM air pollutants due to transport. In Japan the trends are quite less as compared with china but the order of increasing pollution is in same order. In Australia the air pollution is at moderate level nearly 20PPM level.
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in parts per million (PPM) standards. In 2021, China is more suffering by
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media. In the other hand, Australia is having
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. In Japan the trends are quite less
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is in same order. In Australia the
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IELTS academic TThe charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

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