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The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island in between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island in between 2010 and 2017 Q3Py

The illustrated line graph below gives the information about the quantity of traveler who visited specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Overall, the number of visitors who traveled in Caribbean island both staying on cruise ship and staying on island last 2017 reached 3. 5 million visitors in total whereas in year 2011, To begin with, nearly 700000 people who are staying on island in 2010 and 2011 remained constant and by the following year there is a slightly increased for the number of visitors. Nevertheless, In year 2013 to 2015 and again in 2017, in those years these number of travelers reached 1. 5 million and remained stable. In contrast in 2016 who slightly decline by 1. 3 million visitors. On the other hand, there is a noticeable wave for those people who preferred staying on Caribbean island through the first 4 years and in addition to that there is obvious gradually increased by the following years and reached 2000000 of visitors in total. To sum up, the total number of visitors who chosen to stay on a cruise ships got the highest number of visitors while travelers who are in favor of staying on island for their vacation remained constant throughout the years.

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