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the graph shows the sales of chlidren's books adult fiction and educatinal books between 2002 and 2006 in one country

the graph shows the sales of chlidren's books adult fiction and educatinal books between 2002 and 2006 in one country Y1Yn
The rendered line graph compares the sales of various kinds of books in million dollars in one particular country during the period of 2002 to 2006. Overall, the sales of all kinds of books escalated except adult fiction books during the passage of time. Prima facie, it is comspicuous that in 2002, the children's books were sold of about 32 million dollars which escalated to 45 millon dollars in 2005
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IELTS academic the graph shows the sales of chlidren's books adult fiction and educatinal books between 2002 and 2006 in one country

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