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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. OY2y
The graph shows the data of the number of passengers who traveled through the underground station in a day from 6: 00 to 22: 00. Overall, most of the underground facilities are used between 7: 00 to 10: 00 in the morning and 17: 00 to 19: 00. People are not accepting underground facilities during late hours. Firstly, there are two peak hours one is at 8: 00 and the other is at 18: 00, nearly 400 and 375 people used the underground services respectively. On the other hand, there are two nadirs times 6: 00 and 16: 00 each have nearly 100 individuals using the service. Secondly, When 8: 00 AM and 10: 00 AM, the users decline substantially and making the value roughly 185 passengers. Then the graph shows a moderate increase from 10 AM to 1 PM. This is followed by another sharp decrease to 100 people at 4 pm. The rapid increase and decrease pattern appear again between 4 pm and 8 PM.
The graph
shows
the data of the number of passengers who traveled through the
underground
station in a day from 6: 00 to 22: 00.

Overall
, most of the
underground
facilities are
used
between 7: 00 to 10: 00 in the morning and 17: 00 to 19: 00.
People
are not accepting
underground
facilities during late hours.

Firstly
, there are two peak hours one is at 8: 00 and the other is at 18: 00,
nearly
400 and 375
people
used
the
underground
services
respectively
.

On the other hand
, there are two nadirs times 6: 00 and 16: 00 each have
nearly
100 individuals using the service.

Secondly
, When 8: 00 AM and 10: 00 AM, the users decline
substantially
and making the value roughly 185 passengers. Then the graph
shows
a moderate increase from 10 AM to 1 PM. This
is followed
by another sharp decrease to 100
people
at 4 pm. The rapid increase and decrease pattern appear again between 4 pm and 8 PM.
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IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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