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Trend of using internet by females

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The bar chart provides information about the trends in internet use by females in the USA in the years 2000 and 2001. Overall, the highest female internet users age group is from 16 to 18 in the year 2001. On the other hand, in 2000, the maximum number of female users of the internet age group was between 12 and 15. Moreover, the least number of internet users age group was 65 plus they're the minimum use of the internet on both occasion. In terms of comparison, the age group of 12-15 and 19-24 was the same percentage on both of the years which is around 90 and 80%. Furthermore, the age group of 16-18 had a huge peak after 2000 in 2001 which was 100% from less than 90. After that, there was a slight raise in 2001 in the age group of 25-45 then it plunges to 65 plus old women and only 30% of them used the internet in that year whereas in 2000 only 20% of old women used the internet.
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by females in the USA in the years 2000 and 2001.

Overall
, the highest female internet users
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is from 16 to 18 in the
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2001.
On the other hand
, in 2000, the maximum number of female users of the internet
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age
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was between 12 and 15.
Moreover
, the least number of internet users
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age
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was 65 plus they're the minimum
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of the internet on both occasion.

In terms of comparison, the
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age
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of 12-15 and 19-24 was the same percentage on both of the years which is around 90 and 80%.
Furthermore
, the
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age
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of 16-18 had a huge peak after 2000 in 2001 which was 100% from less than 90. After that, there was a slight raise in 2001 in the
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age
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of 25-45 then it plunges to 65 plus
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women and
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30% of them
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the internet in that
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whereas in 2000
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