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Trend in fast food consumption in Britain

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Chart and graph bellow shown consumption pattern and trends of fast food consumption among Britain, respectively. In general, britain prefer to eat humberger than pizza and fish and chip. Clearly shown that Humberger and pizza demand were affected by income while no correlation between income and fish and cheap consumption. Wealthy and avereage income citizen prefer to eat humburger wherease poor one choose fish and chip in first place. High income group consume around 45 pence per person per week which is ten and thirty pence higher than average and low income group, respectively. For pizza, rich group eat almost 20 pece per week which is eight and twelf pence higher than midle and poor one. Midle income consume more fish and chips compare with the other two. Every person belong to meadle income eat fish and chips 25 pence a week while high and low income consumpt 17 and 15 pence, respectively. Data provide from 1970 to 1990 show humberger and pizza have opposite trend with fish and chips consumption. In two decade, demand for humberger and pizza increase exponentially about 6 times since 1970. From 1970 to 1990, humberger and pizza consumption increase from around 100 to 600 grams and 50 to 300 grams, respectively. In contrast with other two, fish and chips deman steadly decrease for about 50 percent from 1970 to 1983 and then slightly increase from 1985 to 1990. Over all, fish and chips demand reduce about 40% in two decade.
Chart and graph bellow shown
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pattern and trends of
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fast
food
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among Britain,
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,
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britain
prefer to
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humberger
than pizza and fish and
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chip
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Clearly
shown that
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Humberger
and pizza demand were
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affected
by
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income
while no correlation between
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income
and fish and
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cheap
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consumption
. Wealthy and
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avereage
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income
citizen prefer to
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eat
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humburger
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wherease
poor one choose fish and
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chip
in
first
place. High
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income
group consume around 45 pence per person per week which is ten and thirty pence higher than average and low
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income
group,
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respectively
. For pizza, rich group
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almost 20
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pece
per week which is eight and
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pence higher than
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midle
and poor one.
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Midle
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income
consume more fish and chips compare with the other two. Every person belong to
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meadle
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fish and chips 25 pence a week while high and low
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income
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consumpt
17 and 15 pence,
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respectively
. Data provide from 1970 to 1990
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humberger
and pizza have opposite trend with fish and chips
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. In two decade, demand for
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humberger
and pizza increase
exponentially
about 6 times since 1970. From 1970 to 1990,
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humberger
and pizza
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increase from around 100 to 600 grams and 50 to 300 grams,
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deman
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decrease for about 50 percent from 1970 to 1983 and then
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about 40% in two
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