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The charts below show the density of people in 2003 and the change of population from 2003 to 2005.

The charts below show the density of people in 2003 and the change of population from 2003 to 2005. 853y5
The given bar charts compare the number of people per square km in 2003, and the proportion change in population between 2003 and 2005 in six nations. Overall, it is clear that although Australian and Canada had the lowest population in 2003, whereas the climb population in these two countries was the maximum in both given years. Looking at the details, it can be seen from the first chart that the highest density of population had in Japan accounted for 338 square km, while Australia and Canada had the least number of people per square km in 2003, followed by the Uk, Italy and Sweden had about 243, 199, 20 human beings square km respectively. Turning to the second chart, from 2003 to 2005, this population increased to 1. 42% and 1. 06% respectively in Australia and Canada, whilst in the Japanese, British and Italian, there was a slow rise in percentage of mankind to 0. 35%, 0. 11%, 0. 25% respectively. Interestingly, the population of Swedish decreased by 0. 1%.
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bar charts compare the number of
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per square km in 2003, and the proportion
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in
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between 2003 and 2005 in six nations.

Overall
, it is
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that although Australian and Canada had the lowest
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population
in 2003, whereas the climb
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in these two countries was the maximum in both
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years.

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, it can be
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from the
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chart that the highest density of
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had in Japan accounted for 338 square km, while Australia and Canada had the least number of
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people
per square km in 2003, followed by the
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, Italy and Sweden had about 243, 199, 20 human beings square km
respectively
.

Turning to the second chart, from 2003 to 2005, this
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population
increased to 1. 42% and 1. 06%
respectively
in Australia and Canada, whilst in the Japanese, British and Italian, there was a slow rise in percentage of mankind to 0. 35%, 0. 11%, 0. 25%
respectively
.
Interestingly
, the
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of Swedish decreased by 0. 1%.
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