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The map shows the bell hill farm and changes between 1976and 2006

The map shows the bell hill farm and changes between 1976and 2006 BJnQ5
The bell hill farm and changes that took place had been illustrated by map chart a period of thirty years In 1976, there was a farmyard in the middle, while which was replaced by a recreational area by 2006. Besides, a cow sheds, which was located in the vicinity of the farmyard. There was a barm on the northside the opposite of the farmyard and next to the storage for farm machinery on the northwest was converted into a car parking area. In 2006, the cow sheds have been taken places of student housing. The roads on the west had also not altered and remained until 2006 The storage far farm machinery on the northwest was converted into a car parking in the westside. The multimedia room that was nearby recreation area in the northside, the barm had been transformed in multimedia room. Overall, it can be observed that there have been several changes in this area as well as farm was transformed into a environment center over a period period of three decades.
The bell hill
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farm
and
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changes
that took place had
been illustrated
by map chart a period of thirty years

In 1976, there was a farmyard in the middle, while which
was replaced
by a recreational area by 2006.
Besides
, a cow sheds, which
was located
in the vicinity of the farmyard. There was a
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barm
on the
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northside
the opposite of the farmyard and
next
to the storage for
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farm
machinery on the northwest
was converted
into a car parking area.

In 2006, the cow sheds have
been taken
places of student housing. The roads on the west had
also
not altered and remained until 2006 The storage far
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farm
machinery on the northwest
was converted
into a car parking in the
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westside
. The multimedia room that was nearby recreation area in the
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northside
, the
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barm
had
been transformed
in multimedia room.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that there have been several
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changes
in this area
as well
as
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farm
was transformed
into
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a
environment center over a
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period period
of three decades.
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