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The data of social and economic indicators in four different nations

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The provided tabular chart depicts the data of social and financial indicators in four different nations during the 1994. Overall, At a quick glance, it is noticeable that, yearly earnings were on the top for Japan and literary level was at the bottom in Zaire in given year. It is crystal clear from the graph in 1994, yearly wages in Canada were $11100. It was followed by Japan with $ 15760 per person. Moreover, for Peru and Zaire it was 160$US and 130$US respectively. Addition, life span was highest in Japan it was registered at 78 years and in had Canada it was 76 years. Peru and Zaire had lowest life existence rather than other nations. Glancing ahead, daily calorie intake by each person in Canada was 3326. In addition every person was utilized 2846 colerie. Furthermore, masses of Peru and Zaire were preferred 1927 and 1749 were respectively. Canadian and japan people were provided higher proportion of education for adult which was recorded at 99% similar in both nations. In Peru 's education level was common and Zaire's was least (34%) as compared to others.

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