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Spending time with friends in a cafe or at home

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Spending time with friends is a crucial event for individuals’ social life. People may share their personal experiences and also do entertaining activities with their friends. Although some people prefer meeting with friends in a cafe or restaurant, the others prefer meeting at home. Individuals who prefer hanging out with friends in a cafe think that it is funnier than meeting at home. Because in a cafe everybody order what they will eat or drink thus no time spended for preapering foods and drinks. In contrast to meeting at home, any family member can not disturb you. By this way, you can spend all the time with your friends. Despite meeting with friends has opportunities certain people find meeting at home more entertaining. First of all when you meet with your friends at home, you also can do different activities except talking. For instance you can watch a film or play a game such as monopoly, puzzles, scrabble and card games. In addition, meeting at home cheaper than cafe, especially if you and your friends like spending time in kitchen, cooking could be a joyful activity for you. Finally, hanging at home with friends can be more relax also your friends can stay at your home at night. In conclusion, there are various aspects of spending time with friends whether in a cafe / restaurant or at home. In my opinion, deciding the activities which will doing in the meeting and choosing the meeting place according to event will be funnier.
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people
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everybody order what they will eat or drink
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foods and drinks.
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at home, any family member can not disturb you. By this way, you can spend all the
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,
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in kitchen, cooking could be a joyful
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for you.
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can be more relax
also
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can stay at your home at night.
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, there are various aspects of spending
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time
with
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friends
whether in a
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/ restaurant or at home. In my opinion, deciding the
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activities
which will doing in the
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and choosing the
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place according to
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will be funnier.
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IELTS academic Spending time with friends in a cafe or at home

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