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Transport Preferences Among Young People

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The bar chart illustrates the number of transportation which young people prefer such as car, motorcycle, bicycle in 4 different European countries in each year Overall, the teenagers are prefer cars to other transportation in UK, US and Italy whereas France is experienced a contrasting. In addition, in Italia there is a big difference among the transportations like the number of young people favorited car have the highest figure while motorcycle and bicycle is the least in that figure. Regardings cars, as for us and uk teenager favorited at this category is the same figures, respective at 60. In terms of Italy, the young people liked cars is the highest is nearly 75 in comparison with all figures and the least of that figures is france with only 40. With regard to motorcycle. Similarly, a total of approximately 10 is prefered on UK, France and Italy whereas the US is significantly higher than that figure, at exactly 30. When it's come to bicycle both UK and france witnessed higher than the same figures like Uk and Italy, respective at 30 and above 44. in that figure, there is a similar downward trend in Italy and Uk at respectively with nearly 10.
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different
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, the
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teenagers
are prefer
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to other transportation in UK, US and Italy whereas France
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favorited
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car
have the highest
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while motorcycle and bicycle is the least in that
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. Regardings
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cars
, as for us and
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uk
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, respective at 60. In terms of Italy, the young
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prefered
on UK, France and Italy whereas the US is
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IELTS academic Transport Preferences Among Young People

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