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the table shows the export value of products

the table shows the export value of products PLkOE

The given table illustrates the amount of money from exporting different products between 2009 and 2010. Generally, the value of exported goods were on the rise while clothing and manufacturing industries were on the contrary. In addition, Metals was the most significant change among five given goods in two years. As can be seen from the table that the total amount of money in five products rose slightly from 32 HK billion to 38, 4 HK billion. In 1997, Equipment was the highest exporter standing at 10, 3 HK billion compared to other sectors, then it increased little by 13% in next year. In addition, there was a substantial growth of 61% in Telecomminity category, with 12. 7 HK billion. Furthermore, the year 2010 witnessed a dramatic increase in the value of Metals by 122%, at 5, 1 HK billion. It is noticeable that Clothing decreased minimally by 17%, 10% more than that of Manufacturing. In 1997, the export value of Clothing started at 6 HK billion and fell to 5 HK billion. Similarly, the amount of money that people earned for Manufacturing declined from 5, 5 HK billion to 4 HK billion.

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little
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Telecomminity
 category, with 12. 7 HK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
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. Furthermore
, the year 2010 witnessed a dramatic increase in the value of Metals by 122%, at 5, 1 HK billion.

It is noticeable that Clothing decreased minimally
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started
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. 