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THE CHART PROVIDES INFORMATION REGARDING THE FERTILITY IN BIRTHS PER WOMAN IN 6 GULF STATES FROM 1990 TO 2000.

THE CHART PROVIDES INFORMATION REGARDING THE FERTILITY IN BIRTHS PER WOMAN IN 6 GULF STATES FROM 1990 TO 2000. B7LD9
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF BIRTHS PER WOMEN IN 6 GULF COUNTRIES OVER A PERIOD OF 10 YEARS. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE BAR CHART THAT THE RATIO OF BIRTHS PER WOMEN IN OMAN WAS THE HIGHEST AMONG OTHER COUNTRIES, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF BIRTHS PER WOMEN IN BAHRAIN WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 4. 1% IN 1990 AND THE AVERAGE OF FERTILITY BIRTHS PER WOMEN IN QATAR SLOWLY DECREASE TO 3. 5% IN 2000. ALTHOUGH ONLY 3. 5% IN 1990 AND THE VALUE OF FERTILITY BIRTHS PER WOMEN IN BAHRAIN DECLINE BY 2. 5% IN 2000. 3RD COUNTRY IS KUWAIT. IN KUWAIT 3. 5% TO 1990 AND NEXT YEAR STEADILY FALL BY 2. 9% IN 2000. 4TH COUNTRY IS OMAN. IN OMAN RATE OF BIRTHS PER WOMEN IMMENSELY GROW AT 7% IN 1990 AND EXPAND BY 5. 5% IN 2000. 5TH COUNTRY IS S. ARABIA. HOWEVER, 6. 9% BIRTH PER WOMEN QUANTITY IN 1990 AND SLIGHTLY DEPRESSION TO 5. 5% IN 2000. LAST COUNTRY IS UAE UNITED STATE OF AMERICA. IN UAE THE NUMERAL OF BIRTHS PER WOMEN IS 4% AND NEXT YEAR THE PROPORTION OF BIRTHS PER WOMEN IN UAE LOW BY 2. 9% IN 2000.
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF
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IN QATAR
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3. 5% IN 1990 AND THE VALUE OF FERTILITY
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IN BAHRAIN DECLINE BY 2. 5% IN 2000. 3RD
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QUANTITY IN 1990 AND
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IS UAE UNITED STATE OF AMERICA.
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