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Past tense line graph of year 1975 to 2002 in the UK

Past tense line graph of year 1975 to 2002 in the UK PgLBd
The given line graph elucidates the data of goods which were transported in the UK in million tonnes through four modes of transportation between the year 1974 and 2002. Overall, what stands out from the line graph is that by the road in the UK highest amount of goods were transported, while the least from the pipeline. To commence with, by the road means, 70 million tonnes of goods were transferred in 1974. Moreover, the amount fluctuated between 60 and 80 million tonnes and reached 82 million tonnes in 1994. In 2002, the amount of transferred goods was slightly less than hundred million tonnes by the road. Additionally, in 1974, 40 million tonnes of goods transported through waterways in the UK, the amount hiked and recorded 55 million tonnes in 1982, after that the amount remained constant at 55 million tonnes till 1994 and slightly decreased in 1998 and again increased at 63 million tonnes in the final year. In addition, goods transported through railways were identical in the amount to the goods which were transferred by waterways in initial years. However, the amount of good transferred by rail mode fluctuated up to next 23 years and in 2002 again the amount reached 40 million tonnes. Moreover, pipeline mode was the least popular mode of transportation of goods in the all given years, in 2002, exact 20 million tonnes of goods transported by pipeline in the UK.
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1974 and 2002.

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million
tonnes of
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fluctuated between 60 and 80
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tonnes in 1994. In 2002, the
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hundred
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transported through waterways in the UK, the
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hiked and recorded 55
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tonnes in 1982, after that the
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remained constant at 55
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