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Tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton

Tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton 6lAVj

The graph below illustrates the proportion of travelers to England who went to four different tourist attractions in Brighton in the period of 30 years started from 1980. Overall, it is clear that the number accounted for visitors traveled to Pier and the Pavilion saw an upward trend throughout the period, while that number for 2 others attractions saw a downward trend. To be specify, in 1980 there was only 10% of tourists went to Brighton Pier. Despite some minor fluctuations, this figure rose from about 12% in 2000 to 22% by the end of the period. Similarity, the percentage visiting the Pavilion also increased, start with 23% in 1980 before reached a peak with half of visitors visited by the year 1995. However, this figure experienced a dramatically decline to 30% in 2010, slightly higher than the festival. By contrast, Festival was the most prevalent location that recorded the highest number of visitors came to with 30% in 1980, however, this proportion had fallen slightly to 28% at the end of the period. 21% was the number of travelers visit art gallery in the first year. It rose to a peak of 38%, but then saw a significant decreased to less than 10% by 2010, which also became the least popular of attractions.

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different
 tourist attractions in Brighton in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 of 30 years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from 1980.

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clear
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 accounted for visitors traveled to Pier and the Pavilion This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 an upward trend throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
, while that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 for 2 others attractions This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a downward trend.

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specify
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only
 10% of tourists went to Brighton Pier. Despite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 minor fluctuations, this figure rose from about 12% in 2000 to 22% by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
. Similarity, the percentage visiting the Pavilion also
 increased, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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before
 reached a peak with half of visitors visited by the year 1995. However
, this figure experienced a You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
dramatically decline
 to 30% in 2010, slightly
 higher than the festival.

By contrast, Festival was the most prevalent location that recorded the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of visitors came to with 30% in 1980, however
, this proportion had fallen slightly
 to 28% at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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period
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number
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but
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saw
 a significant decreased to less than 10% by 2010, which also
 became the least popular of attractions. 