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A line graph is given information about sales of gold in dubai in 2002 in millions of dirhams

A line graph is given information about sales of gold in dubai in 2002 in millions of dirhams PMJ8K
A flucutating single line graph is given providing an data regarding the sales of gold in Dubai in all months during 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Overall, it is evident that the highest sales of gold had touched by march; However, the lowest sales were july and sep. According to given chart, In former month, sales of gold had been diverted by 200 millions of dirhams and In the next month 25 millions sales of gold had soared. In march, 350 million touched by 3rd month which was the highest sales among all month. In fourth month, sales had plumted by 100 million dirhams. Furthermore, In may sales of gold had tanked which accounted by the same millions of dirahms in contrast first month. In addition, In june and july sales of gold had 150 and roughly 120 respectively. Heading towards the August, a sales of gold again upsurged were at just over 200 millions and In sep sales had dropped and counted by round about same incomparsion july. In oct and nov sales of gold had approximately samed and In last year, sales had nearly 180.
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of gold had touched by march;
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dirhams
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of gold had soared. In
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of gold had 150 and roughly 120
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of gold again upsurged were at
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sep
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had dropped and counted by round about same
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IELTS academic A line graph is given information about sales of gold in dubai in 2002 in millions of dirhams

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