Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Below shows the percentage number of radio and TV audience in UK in year 2012. summarise this information and make report of it by comparing the main features and comparison.

Below shows the percentage number of radio and TV audience in UK in year 2012. summarise this information and make report of it by comparing the main features and comparison. 9aVe0
The line chart illustrate the proportion of UK population, which entertained by to vivid medium, namely radio and TV throughout the day time in year 2012. Initially both radio and TV audience to call tat around 5% from midnight 1 a. m. to 6 a. m. however the train starts to fluctuate after that firstly from 7 a. m. to 9 a. m. radio listeners percentage skyrocketing up to 28 % while TV users managed to gradually rose at 7%. Although number of radio users sapla plummeted all the way to 70% at 14: 00 o'clock at the same time percentage of TV watches were similar, with rise of 10% since 9 a. m. Furthermore, TV viewers figure plateaued at same digit for next two hours before dramatically went up to highest 50%, followed by a downfall by 10% to trailed off at 40%. However, for radio hearer percentage constantly decreased all the way to 7% at the end of the day with a lot of movement in trend. Overall, till dawn percentage of audience of both TV and radio remains stable, but during morning session number of people, who enjoyed listening radio were high. Though, after that till day ends, TV users were at peak, and average usage of TV surpasses the radio usage.
The line chart illustrate the proportion of UK population, which entertained by to vivid medium,
namely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
and TV throughout the day time in year 2012.
Initially
both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
and TV audience to call tat around 5% from midnight 1 a. m. to 6 a. m.
however
the train
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
to fluctuate after that
firstly
from 7 a. m. to 9 a. m.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "listeners'" or "listener's"?
listeners
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percentage
skyrocketing up to 28 % while TV users managed to
gradually
rose at 7%. Although number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
users
Possible spelling mistake found.
sapla
plummeted all the way to 70% at 14: 00 o'clock at the same time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percentage
of TV
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watches
were similar, with rise of 10% since 9 a. m.
Furthermore
, TV viewers figure plateaued at same digit for
next
two hours
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
dramatically
went up to highest 50%, followed by a downfall by 10% to trailed off at 40%.
However
, for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
hearer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percentage
constantly
decreased all the way to 7% at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the day with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
movement in trend.
Overall
, till dawn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percentage
of audience of both TV and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
remains stable,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
during morning session number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, who enjoyed listening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
were high. Though, after that till day ends, TV users were at peak, and average usage of TV surpasses the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
radio
usage.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Below shows the percentage number of radio and TV audience in UK in year 2012. summarise this information and make report of it by comparing the main features and comparison.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
215 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Below shows the percentage number of radio and TV audience in UK in year 2012. summarise this information and make report of it by comparing the main features and comparison.