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Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011 ... According to the line graph, Tourist Information Office received

Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011. . . According to the line graph, Tourist Information Office received Yk8nn

The given line graph illustrates which methods are used by the traveller to ask tourist information. Overall, many tourists ask about information to use their telephone and in-person, this figure increased steadily. The number of letters, emails have decreased. In January, telephone enquiries were the largest number around at 830 times. Telephone enquiries were decreased temporarily only in the february. After the following month, this number increased steadily 800 times to 1600 times during 5 months. The in-person showed the biggest changes in the figure during the whole categories. In the first month, it begins at around 420. This figure continued to rise, and by June, it stood at 1850 times. The number of emails and letters steadily dropped every month. It was maintained for a while in February and March, but it has continued to drop since then. Finally the number of letters and emails reached less than 400 times.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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used
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traveller
 to ask tourist information.

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many
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use
 their telephone and in-person, this figure increased steadily
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of letters, emails have decreased.

In January, telephone Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.inquiries
enquiries
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number
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times
. Telephone Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.inquiries
enquiries
were decreased
temporarily
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only
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february
. After the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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times
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times
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months
. The in-person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the biggest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the figure during the whole categories. In the first
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month
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 at around 420. This figure continued to rise, and by June, it stood at 1850 times.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of emails and letters steadily
 dropped every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
. It was maintained
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but
 it has continued to drop since then. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of letters and emails reached less than 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
. 