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The line graph below shows the consumption of chicken,beef and fish meat in UK in year 1980 and 2000

The line graph below shows the consumption of chicken, beef and fish meat in UK in year 1980 and 2000 jD0Pp

The rendered line graph depicts the intake of chicken, beef and fish meat in UK from 1980 to 2000Overall, it is evident that chicken was liked by most of denizens, while very few people choose to eat fish meat In year 1980 the consumption of chicken meat was about 70%, whereas that of fish meat was well under 82%; however, in later year the intake of fish meat dropped by 2%, while the number of people who eat chicken increased double which was 90%. Moving further, the individuals who eat beef remained same in both the years which was just under 75%.

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