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It is often contributed that children should always obey to advise which is given by parents.

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It is often contributed that children should always obey to advise which is given by parents. To a certain extent I agree, that advice from the old generation is beneficial for youngsters, while I also believe that in some reasons parental advice can totally change their direction. On the one hand, we should follow guardians' advice because it is useful for children. Parents have knowledge and awareness about life, as they went through this age, and they could be the best assistant of the kids, which only recently came into the world. Also, obeying to the parents' advice can play a significant role in achieving success. For instance, it is common to see that, children who followed their guardians' council were more successful in their life. That's why it is better to obey some of their advice. On other hand, some advice can misdirect children. Nowadays, adolescents are more intelligent and diligent than the older generation and are able to identify what would be beneficial and correct for them. For example, when teenagers try to select their future university or career. In my country, some people still force becoming a doctor or lawyer for their sons and daughters despite some of them having potential as a celebrity, sportsman or programmer. In other words, parents should not instil their children to pick something, that they want to do and be. To summarize, I agree that on special occasions advice could be life-saving, but it should be without enforcement

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