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The benefits of computer essay task 2

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There are a wide range of merits of utilising computer in this days and age. To begin with, it could be clearly seen that technlogy devices bring entertainment benefits, communication advantages and working productivity which can lead to greater working efficiency. For instance, in vietnam, thanks to the wide use of computer at school, online platform would bring about its values toward corona virus cicumstances. If there is no appearance of technology in this world, people will not know how to deal with this issue during infection era. In short, computer holds a load of benefits for not only personal purposes but also human community.
There are a wide range of merits of
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utilising
computer in
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this days
and age.

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begin
with, it could be
clearly
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seen
that
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technlogy
devices bring entertainment benefits, communication advantages and working productivity which can lead to greater working efficiency.
For instance
, in
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vietnam
, thanks to the wide
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use
of computer at school, online platform would bring about its values toward
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corona virus
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cicumstances
. If there is no appearance of technology in this world,
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people
will not know how to deal with this issue during infection era. In short, computer holds a load of benefits for not
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only
personal purposes
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but
also
human community.

IELTS academic The benefits of computer essay task 2

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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