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Tourism on Fairmount Island

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The two pie charts illustrate the most benefits and drawbacks of Fairmont Island based on the tourist's opinion. From a first glance, the most popular selection of visitors on the survey is the residents of Fairmont island and the major drawback is the high cost of living. First, there are four-plus points that attract tourists to visit this island. As mentioned above the local people with 40% is the highest advantage and followed by the scenery with 37%. Finally, the culture and good accommodation cited by visitors as third and fourth with 12% and 11% respectively. Second, the drawbacks. The most off-putting thing was the high expense of living with 45% which was followed by recreation with 30%. The final two disadvantages that respondents on the survey cited were the bad climate of the island and the poor food quality by 20% and 5%.
The two pie charts illustrate the most benefits and drawbacks of Fairmont
Island
based on the tourist's opinion.

From a
first
glance, the most popular selection of visitors on the survey is the residents of Fairmont
island
and the major drawback is the high cost of living.

First
, there are four-plus points that attract tourists to visit this
island
. As mentioned above the local
people
with 40% is the highest advantage and followed by the scenery with 37%.
Finally
, the culture and
good
accommodation cited by visitors as third and fourth with 12% and 11%
respectively
.

Second, the drawbacks. The most off-putting thing was the high expense of living with 45% which
was followed
by recreation with 30%. The final two disadvantages that respondents on the survey cited were the
bad
climate of the
island
and the poor food quality by 20% and 5%.
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IELTS academic Tourism on Fairmount Island

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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