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The pie charts portray the potion of the population by age group ang gives a future forecast in Italy and Yemen over a 50-year period.

The pie charts portray the potion of the population by age group ang gives a future forecast in Italy and Yemen over a 50-year period. 9lwG7
The pie charts portray the potion of the population by age group ang gives a future forecast in Italy and Yemen over a 50-year period. By having a more meticulous review it is evident that it is predicted that the share of the people over 60 will increase in both countries whereas the share of the kids under 14 will shrink In both states and the portion of teenagers above 14 and adults below 60 will reduce in Italy while increasing in Yemen. At first glance, it is obvious that the share of adult population and children was similar at 46. 3% and 50. 1% respectively while the elders were at 3. 6%. It is estimated that the share of the elder residents will rise than 1. 5 times at 5. 7 followed by more humble roughly quarter gain of adults portion at 57. 3%. Children however will only comprise 37% by losing one-fourth of their share. Italy will have more than three-quarter growth in the adult population by reaching 42. 3% in 2050 compared to 24. 8% in 2000. The share of citizens over 14 however will reduce by one-third and do down to 46. 2% in 2050 from 61. 2% in 2000 while the change in children also decreasing and falling to 11. 5% in 2050.
The pie charts portray the potion of the population by age group ang gives a future forecast in Italy and Yemen over a 50-year period. By having a more meticulous review it is evident that it
is predicted
that the
share
of the
people
over 60 will increase in both countries whereas the
share
of the kids under 14 will shrink In both states and the portion of
teenagers
above 14 and
adults
below 60 will
reduce
in Italy while increasing in Yemen.

At
first
glance, it is obvious that the
share
of adult population and children was similar at 46. 3% and 50. 1%
respectively
while the elders were at 3. 6%. It
is estimated
that the
share
of the elder residents will rise than 1. 5 times at 5. 7 followed by more humble roughly quarter gain of
adults
portion at 57. 3%. Children
however
will
only
comprise 37% by losing one-fourth of their share.

Italy will have more than three-quarter growth in the adult population by reaching 42. 3% in 2050 compared to 24. 8% in 2000. The
share
of citizens over 14
however
will
reduce
by one-third and do down to 46. 2% in 2050 from 61. 2% in 2000 while the
change
in children
also
decreasing and falling to 11. 5% in 2050.
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IELTS academic The pie charts portray the potion of the population by age group ang gives a future forecast in Italy and Yemen over a 50-year period.

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