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Write a descriptive essay of a famous historical figure. Where is the person from? Why is the person important? ls the person still living? What are some of the person's accomplishments?

Write a descriptive essay of a famous historical figure. Where is the person from? Why is the person important? ls the person still living? What are some of the person's accomplishments? 267e6
I’d like to tell you about one of my inspired and famous historical figures in the world. He is Prophet Muhammad. Muhammad is a last prophet and the messeger of Allah. He is the most important figure and a leader for the moeslims in the world because he gave us the true guidance to the Allah’s ways. Prophet Muhammad is born in 571 CE in Mecca and became an orphan when he was six years old. When he was 40, he got the first revelation from Allah through the Jibril in the cave. And then he had a long spiritual journey called Isra and Mi’raj to heaven and met Allah to get guidance about praying activities. Prophet Muhammad is kind of the fearless person and has well leadership when he lead the battles. He leads the squads effectively with a strong belief in Allah. He and his troops had won many kinds of wars that happened during his era. He also teaches us to not kill innocent people like women, children, older people and others. There are such good things that I can learn from him. He has a good heart, a simple and humble person, respectful, charismatic and not a vindictive man. He never revenges someone who always hates and insults him, otherwise do something good to them. He always gave guidance in a soft way to encourage people to believe in Allah. So, all of those characters of Prophet Muhammad is truly inspiring me and deserving to be the best figure in my religious life.
I’d like to
tell
you about one of my inspired and
famous
historical figures in the world. He is Prophet Muhammad. Muhammad is a last prophet and the
messeger
of Allah. He is the most
important
figure and a leader for the
moeslims
in the world
because
he gave us the true guidance to the Allah’s ways.

Prophet Muhammad
is born
in 571 CE in Mecca and became an orphan when he was six years
old
. When he was 40, he
got
the
first
revelation from Allah through the
Jibril
in the cave. And then he had a long spiritual journey called
Isra
and Mi’
raj
to heaven and met Allah to
get
guidance about praying activities.

Prophet Muhammad is kind of the fearless person and has well leadership when he
lead
the battles. He leads the squads
effectively
with a strong belief in Allah. He and his troops had won
many
kinds of wars that happened during his era.
He
also
teaches us to not kill innocent
people
like women, children, older
people
and others
.

There are such
good
things that I can learn from him. He has a
good
heart, a simple and humble person, respectful, charismatic and not a vindictive
man
. He never revenges someone who always hates and insults him,
otherwise
do something
good
to them.
He
always gave guidance
in a soft way
to encourage
people
to believe in Allah.
So
, all of those characters of Prophet Muhammad is
truly
inspiring me and deserving to be the best figure in my religious life.
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IELTS academic Write a descriptive essay of a famous historical figure. Where is the person from? Why is the person important? ls the person still living? What are some of the person's accomplishments?

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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