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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five consumer goods (car, computers, books, perfume and cameras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling. Overall, the UK spent more money on consumer goods than France in the period given. Both the British and the French spent most of their money on cars whereas the least amount of money was spent on perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France. Futhermore, the most significant difference in expenditure between the two countries was on cameras. In terms of car, people in the UK spent about £450, 000 on this as apposed to the French who spent £400, 000. Similarly, the British spent more money on books than the French (around £400, 000 and £300, 000 respectively. In the UK, expenditure on cameras (just over £350, 000) was double that of France, which was only 150, 000. On the other hand, the amount spent on the remaining goods was higher in France. Above £350, 000 was spent by the French on computers which was slightly more than the British who spent exactly £350, 000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for £200, 000 of expenditure in France but under £150, 000 in the UK.
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(car, computers, books, perfume and cameras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units
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than France in the period
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on cars whereas the least amount of
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was
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on perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France.
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about £450, 000 on this as apposed to the French who
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£400, 000.
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over £350, 000) was double that of France, which was
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on the remaining
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was higher in France. Above £350, 000 was
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by the French on computers which was
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exactly £350, 000. Neither of the countries
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much on perfume which accounted for £200, 000 of expenditure in France
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under £150, 000 in the UK.
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