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Energy is used in an average household .

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glance at the charts provided reveal some information on energy consumption by Australian families and amount of greenhouse gas emission spread, because of energy use. Although heating uses more than other energy items 42 percent. It emits only 15 percen here in house. On the other hand, cooling, and lighting, at least number in energy used to percentage, and 4 %respectively. Although the format figure has not changed. Obviously, the second statistic has doubled. Water heating figures are equal in both charts. In fact, the usage, and its effects are relative and equality. Why do refrigeration and other appliances, allocate 22 percentage of energy usage, totally. The overall rates have doubled, approximately in next chart 42 row, heating and water team are two energies that be used more than others. Also, water tank, and other appliances have noticeable effect on greenhouse emission.
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consumption by Australian families and amount of greenhouse gas emission spread,
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appliances, allocate 22 percentage of
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IELTS academic Energy is used in an average household.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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