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The graph below shows the number of medals won by male and female athletes of Xavier&rsquo's College in 5 different sporting events Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the number of medals won by men and women, in various sports as football, volleyball, chess and snooker, of Xavier&rsquo's College. Overall, the women have won more medals in two categories that is volley ball and chess whereas men have outnumbered the women in football. It is quite evident that males have outnumbered the females in football (above 40 and around 25 respectively) whereas the females have won more than 35 medals in volleyball where the males have fairly managed to grab nearly 25. When it comes to chess females have outshone the male by a huge difference as women have won more than 40 medals and men have just managed to get around 15. But there is one sport where both the genders have scored level and it is snooker. We can clear see that 20 medals have been won by both male and female.
The diagram illustrates the number of
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won by
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and
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women
, in various sports as football, volleyball, chess and snooker, of
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Xavier&rsquo
's College.
Overall
, the
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women
have won more
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medals
in two categories
that is
volley ball and chess whereas
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men
have outnumbered the
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women
in football.

It is quite evident that
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males
have outnumbered the
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females
in football (above 40 and around 25
respectively
) whereas the
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females
have won more than 35
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medals
in volleyball where the
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have
fairly
managed to grab
nearly
25.

When it
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comes
to chess
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females
have outshone the male by a huge difference as
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women
have won more than 40
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medals
and
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men
have
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just
managed to
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around 15.

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there is one sport where both the genders have scored level and it is snooker. We can
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clear
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that 20
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have
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.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of medals won by male and female athletes of Xavier&rsquo's College in 5 different sporting events

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